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Today was your first day living in London, England. You and your parents moved here from New York because of you dads job. You were sitting in your new room, about triple the size of your room in NY, unpacking the rest of your items, which was not much. You heard from your parents that the house was very close by to one of the best private schools in the world, and you were to start there in a week.

"______" your mother yells "How is the unpacking going?"

"Fine, Mother. there is not much left."

"Good. There is a Family that lives next door and they will be coming over for dinner tonight so make sure you get cleaned up!"

"Sounds Good."

"I forgot to mention, they have three boys around your age."

"Thanks for the Info."

Right before you left, your boyfriend Alfred dumped you because he said he did not want a long distance relationship. when you had arrived at the airport, you called his cellphone but it went to his voice mail.

"Hi, this is Alfred F. Jones. please leave a message if you are not _______."

You still had feelings for Alfred, but he rejected them. the last thing you unpack is a big cork board with pictures of you, your friends, and Alfred. sighing, you hang up the board above your bed. looking out the window, you see a boy with blonde hair and green eyes staring at you. the minute you look at him, he looks away. you change into your navy blue casual dress and black flats, pulling your long (H/C) hair back into a braid. a few minutes later, the doorbell rings.

"I got it!" You say, running downstairs. You open the door and see a woman with dark red hair and green eyes.

"Hello there. i am Elizabeth Kirkland and these are my boys, Iain, Christan, and Arthur." the boys each had green eyes, but Iain had dark red hair, while Christan and Arthur had blonde hair.

"Nice to meet all of you. I'm ______. Please come inside." you say, and they follow you to the dining room for dinner, which is beef stew and potatoes. The whole time at dinner, it seemed that Arthur was staring at you. After finishing dinner, everyone went outside around a fire. you feel a tap on your shoulder, and he is right behind you.

"Excuse me, but i feel like we have met before. Do you know someone by the name of Alfred Jones?"

He just had to start the conversation by bringing up him

"Arthur, please excuse me." tears welling up in your eyes, you run back into the house.

Arthur's POV

"Great job Arthur," whispers Iain,"Make the lass cry the first day you meet her."

I run back into the house and go upstairs and find her crying in her room, and knock on the door

"Hey, its me."

Your POV

"Go Away!" i yell, wiping the tears from my eyes.

"What did i do?" he asks. sounding like he is going to leave.

"Come inside" i yell, opening the door. he walks inside with a sad look upon his face.

"Tell me what i did." He asks

"Alfred used to be my boyfriend until yesterday," you say, grabbing his photo off of your wall. "He didn't want to have a long distance relationship so he dumped me."

"That's were i remember you." he begins "Alfred is my brother and he sent me a photo of you and him because i did not believe he actually had a girlfriend."


"He told me everything about you and how great of a person you are."

"Really Arthur?"


"Do you think that I'm a good person?" you ask

"Yes!" He blurts, a blush creeping up on his face.

"Thanks." you say, ruffling his messy blonde hair

"Arthur, were going!" Elizabeth says

"I need to go, _______. Ill see you tomorrow?"


"Goodnight then," He says, taking your hand and kissing it

"Goodnight" You say, your face turning red.

After he leaves, you take the pictures of Alfred and you and throw them in the trash, crawl under your covers and cradle the hand Arthur kissed until you fall asleep.
Yay! My first fanfiction ever! WHAT NOW UNIVERSE!
I wrote more, but they all suck, so this is my first one on deviantart!

I do not own Hetalia
Scotland (Iain)
England (Arthur)
Australia (Christan)
Elizabeth (Queen of England)
or you, but i wish i did

Part Two Coming Soon! (Or maybe not, if my computer dies then you are going to wait a while)

One more thing,
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crystallynx Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student Artist
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE SCONESS!!!!!!!!-wait,.......did Arthur make them? yes?: then its a no........... no?: its a yes
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Edited Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You made the scones right not Arthur hehe... -_-"
dancechamp520 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
> yeah people, EAT MY BLOODY SCONES!!!!
IAmYourAnimeSenpai Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
No thank you
minecraftkittyverse Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
I might be eating scones soon coz my mum is gonna make them YUM!!!!!!!!
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
1. Why do you want to own me?? :?
2. I'll take my chances with your scones. :D
temaitafoeva Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
*reads despciption*  NNNNEUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!  I DONT WANNA EAT SCONES!!!!!! :iconrunbitchrunplz:
kittycat17643 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
neh i don't like to correct cus this is a REALLY good story but aussie look's like dis ( )
PACKWOMEN12 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student
write another chappie plez!!! i really  really liked it!!!!!!!!! :))
RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student Writer
Aww Al dumped me *sulks* he's like one of my favourite characters
QuxxnAri Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Salmonella123 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
SCONES ARE FUCKING DELICIOUS!!!! Sorry for the language but seriously they are
RP-96Neko Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
thats what i say to every one lol
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student General Artist
*eating your scones*Nomnomnom:likeaboss:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
animelover-8 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U can own me that's fine all of my girl-friends are always saying that they r going to stalk me or rape me... Meh i don't really care either way :3D
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student General Artist
That...sounds very scary...
animelover-8 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually they never do anything it's an inside joke
EmiliaSteilsson142 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Please make more
kishukittygirl Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
w-what?!?! you wanna own me?? fine by me! ^^
HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll eat some scones :like a boss: and you own me if you want lol XD
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
*raises hand* I'll eat your scones. :iconchallangeacceptedplz:
Like a BOSS
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
yep. :iconimfabulousplz:
Loz *raises hand* ill try one too I made fail scones earlier
Ira-kago Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love dis O-O
Kumajiro921 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013   Artist
It's sweet and sad. Still better than reality~!
WTHHDolly Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No america's a jerk !!!!!
samikira Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist
awww that's who christian is , he's Australia
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
wow! i love it and the ending is sweet in a weird way
lillyan-chan Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks! ^^ I'm good at wierd endings
monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
yes, yes u r. hey who is ur icon? is that russia?
lillyan-chan Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Artist
My icon is Iceland ^^
monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
oh ok. i thought it was russia for a second
Aeon-Caliburn Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
So cute (that does sound like somehing that America would do)
Kahen-san Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kiddopolis Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
supebowlerE Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
don't dis the scones i went to london with my high school band and i had a scone there and it was, how prussia would say it was, AWSOME!!!!!!!

who would have known that Arthur could be a studd muffin
lillyan-chan Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student Artist
I'm guessing the scones were cooked by France.


I'm sorry everyone it's taking me so long to write part 3 it's just I've been so busy lately :(
supebowlerE Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
NO I HAD THE SCONES AT STONEHENGE which is out in the middle of nowhere so dont dis. i saw the baking stuff in the back of the building through the window where you order.

ps if you go get a cheter cheese scone that is what i had
My-British-Pirate Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, you're missing a few capitals and punctuation marks here and there, but it didn't really affect the overall flow of the lines and story (maybe fix those?).

Interesting story, I look forward to future chapters. I've always wanted one of those two-story houses with my bedroom window facing the neighbor's window. Especially if it were a cute boy/ one of my guy friends in that room. Then I could have a sketchpad conversation with them; like the one from that Taylor Swift music video (and in here sorta)... :iconiloveitplz:

I will totally eat your scones; I don't get what people have against them, they're amazing! :iconyayenglandplz:
JazzyNekoKetsueki Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, I go eat yo scones.
AshTreeHollow Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You wish you could own me?
LetMeBelieve Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But I still love this so please Update soon!!!! X3
lillyan-chan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student Artist
I added Sealand in the next part!
Thanks for reading!
LetMeBelieve Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!! X3
darkwerewolf123 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
nomheartluvs Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahmaigosh there needs to be moar to this:D
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